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Manmade Lake

June 5, 2013
By Versesversus SILVER, Kyle, Texas
Versesversus SILVER, Kyle, Texas
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The water bubbles,
Artificial,
and Too Blu
to be true.
But
there is something
about the wind
molding
forming
ripples over the surface
chain reaction to the end
that catches
in the eyes,
heart,
claws its way up
to beauty.
Maybe it tries
too hard to be natural
and so
slaughters perfection
like nature is its foe.
The wind helps murderers.
It's only natural.



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Mckay ELITE said...
on Jun. 11 2013 at 2:39 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

This poem creates an absolutely gorgesous image. The wording you use helps create an ambiance the goes perfectly with the image you convey. Wonderful poem.