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Time ceases.

My heart skips a beat.

The world drops.

I fall to my feet.

The clouds spin.

I look to the sky.

A hand reaches.

I choke out a cry.

A voice speaks.

My eyes dart away.

The sound repeats.

My soul seems to sway.

The universe splits.

I'm unable to breathe.

The whirlwind roars.

My mind wants to seethe.

A door opens.

I stare through the hole.

A creature looks back.

The eyes shaped like a bowl.

The portal opens.

I want my freedom.

A cheer shouts.

I've entered the kingdom.



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DawnieRae said...
today at 7:24 am:
I agree with GraphicWriter. that was really good!
 
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GraphicWriterThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 15 at 12:01 am:
In short sentences, you have gathered little glimpses of dreams... Like I can see the creature and it is reading this to me, painting pictures in my mind. Beautiful and yet daunting at the same time.
 
freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jun. 15 at 1:19 pm :
wow thank u!! :)
 
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