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you were spring rain

May 23, 2013
By thinkblot PLATINUM, Brookfield, Wisconsin
thinkblot PLATINUM, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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you were spring rain, the
quiet moments of wide open skies
and half open hearts and I
watched your long descent to earth
and how you clung to the concrete
so steadfast and silent.

the entire time you fluttered in the
wind, your eyes half shut, and I
wanted to split the ground before you
landed.

and I wish I could have held you
for just a heartbeat longer
before I lost you in the cascade of
words and time and time and words
before gravity called you away.



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on Jun. 9 2013 at 6:24 pm
thinkblot PLATINUM, Brookfield, Wisconsin
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thank you so much!

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on Jun. 9 2013 at 11:32 am
sarah98 BRONZE, Holyoke, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
It is better to write for yourself and have no audience than write for your audience and have no self.

o this is sooo beautiful. i honestly love this. the words are so poetic and entrancing.