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Attack

May 29, 2013
By BrittanyNicole103 SILVER, Ash Grove, Missouri
BrittanyNicole103 SILVER, Ash Grove, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
"Life's not about waiting for the storm to pass, it's about learning to dance in the rain."


Another attack
Worse than the one before
This one leaves me
Gasping on the floor

Another attack
I think I'm gonna die
Surrounded by you
Surrounded by your lies

Another attack
I can't breathe
You're just a memory
So why won't you leave

Another attack
The walls are closing in
Wrapping me, trapping me
Convicted by your sin

Another attack
Filling me with fear
I can't see straight
I can't think clear

Another attack
What's wrong with me
Another attack
And I'm history



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nytola said...
on Jun. 3 2013 at 7:29 pm
Well done!

on Jun. 2 2013 at 11:20 pm
WrenArrington, Sioux Falls, South Dakota
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I liked the way you divided your poem into neat, easy-to-read stanzas with a good rhyme scheme. The repitition of "another attack" really tied the whole thing together even more than the slightly differing content of each stanza did. Nice job :) PS: If you want to check out some of my stuff, you're more than welcome to, and it would be greatly appreciated ;)