Vanished

May 26, 2013
By AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez


You made me happy
then everything changed
You vanished

Never called
Never wrote me
Never emailed
Nothing

Why can't you tell me you love me and not disappear the next day
You used to be my everything

It's okay, I'm saying its over without telling you
I've found someone new who does care

One who won't disappear like you
One who loves me for me
and doesn't care about my past
I wish that was you, but you had your chance


The author's comments:
a guy said he loved me then i never really heard or saw him

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on Apr. 8 2014 at 6:34 pm
MaggieWilliams SILVER, Bradenton, Florida
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Awesome job writing this!!!

on Nov. 18 2013 at 3:31 pm
AloneandFree SILVER, Williamston, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
Rise above the storm and you will find the sunshine.
-Mario Fernandez

thanks for your input

HammadWaseem said...
on Jul. 18 2013 at 12:48 pm
HammadWaseem, Lahore, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Be proud of who you are.
-Eminem

You can't see me
-John Cena

Ooh, somebody stop me!
-Mask

its amazing! i like it! good job.

on Jun. 29 2013 at 7:46 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I really like the idea behind this. I think it's a little overdone (the subject) but it was well-written....maybe if anything it just needed to be less direct. More poetic? I don't know. I still really liked it, and i can relate very well to it XD keep writing! Good job, 5/5


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