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You made me happy
then everything changed
You vanished

Never called
Never wrote me
Never emailed
Nothing

Why can't you tell me you love me and not disappear the next day
You used to be my everything

It's okay, I'm saying its over without telling you
I've found someone new who does care

One who won't disappear like you
One who loves me for me
and doesn't care about my past
I wish that was you, but you had your chance



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MaggieWilliams said...
today at 6:34 pm:
Awesome job writing this!!!
 
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HammadWaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jul. 18, 2013 at 12:48 pm:
its amazing! i like it! good job.
 
luvmeformeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Nov. 18, 2013 at 3:31 pm :
thanks for your input
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jun. 29, 2013 at 7:46 pm:
I really like the idea behind this. I think it's a little overdone (the subject) but it was well-written....maybe if anything it just needed to be less direct. More poetic? I don't know. I still really liked it, and i can relate very well to it XD keep writing! Good job, 5/5
 
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