Light In Dark Heaven

May 27, 2013
By itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"best way to save humanity is to turn the monsters against one another"~neil shusterman


The night of
Dark heaven
That tenders light.

Nameless grace
Waves softly thoughts that
Serenely express life.

How pure and eloquent
In the day of goodness
At peace with love.

Skies meet in
The night of dark heaven
With innocent glow.

One ray lightens
So calm that wins
the goodness of life.



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itsana GOLD said...
on Jan. 5 2014 at 7:48 pm
itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"best way to save humanity is to turn the monsters against one another"~neil shusterman

Thanks so much!:D and I will thanks for the recommendation

on Jan. 5 2014 at 10:37 am
haley101 DIAMOND, Windsor, Connecticut
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Favorite Quote:
“Someone I loved once gave me a box full of darkness. It took me years to understand that this too, was a gift.”

― Mary Oliver

this is beautiful. it reminds me of Mary Oliver's work. She's a poet. You should good some of her poems!  

itsana GOLD said...
on Jun. 2 2013 at 12:09 am
itsana GOLD, Plano, Texas
12 articles 0 photos 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
"best way to save humanity is to turn the monsters against one another"~neil shusterman

Thanks for the awesome suggestion! I will apply it to my next poems(: 

on Jun. 1 2013 at 6:07 pm
Carpe-Caffeam GOLD, No Where, Florida
10 articles 0 photos 445 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If it weren’t for the coffee, I’d have no identifiable personality whatsoever.” –David Letterman

I love the serenity! My only suggestion is to make "the goodness of life" less vague and more powerful as it is the last phrase in this poem (and deserves some spunk/punch that will wow the reader). Otherwise, excellent job! :D Have a nice day!


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