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I scream myself awake
the words stuck on my tongue
it burns until I feel no more
it burns till I am numb

I hate that you don't see me
and the fire flush on my skin
but through it all
beside it all
beneath it all
with out it all
I still hear your name
and grin.




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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 5:04 pm:
This is really cool :) I love the repetiveness of the last few lines especially. 
 
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IlovemeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 26 at 2:23 am:
The idea of this poem is really novel and inspiring. Love how you kept us engaged!
 
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