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shine

in the soft warm
after understanding each
other just a little better
and it began to rain
little grey kisses
on cold cement
melting the final
untold
affection between
maybe it's a little too
late or
too early
to tell
but as the gentle slate sky
of a summer's
beginning sets gently
in the inlet's arms
I will lean
into your invisible
comfortable presence
and
think of how you
shine




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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
today at 12:53 pm:
I definitely love this one. "little grey kisses"—best line of the poem, in my opinion. And how you express your deep love for this poem. You have a talent for expressing emotion without becoming overly emotional. 5 stars.
 
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