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without you

I hate this life
I wish I could die
Then I wouldn't have to pretend
To be happy
I can't keep going on
It hurts way too much
Without you in my life
Without your gentle touch

I hurt so much on the inside
But it doesn't show through
I will always feel this way
Until I can finally be with you

My life is worth nothing
No joy in my heart
I wish we could forget
And have a brand new start

I want you to come back
I need you here with me
I wish he'd be here holding me close
But he just doesn't see my love for him

Until you return
I'll feel this way
I'll never forget you
Not even for a day



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Poetry2Love said...
May 25, 2013 at 8:52 pm:
Aww, it's adorable. I really like it.
 
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Kittycatdancer15 said...
May 21, 2013 at 5:31 pm:
WOW  Thank you..that means a lot.
 
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FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 21, 2013 at 5:29 pm:
This is really good, your poem decribes what you feel perfectly and it pulls me in wanting to read more and more
 
Kittycatdancer15 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 5:32 pm :
thank you soooooo much :P
 
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Ali101 said...
May 21, 2013 at 5:28 pm:
wow thats absolutley amazing . I feel like that sometimes.... with certain people... Love it ! Amazing
 
Kittycatdancer15 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 5:30 pm :
Thank you so much!!
 
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SunballSunnyThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 21, 2013 at 5:15 pm:
i feel exactiy the same way :(
 
Kittycatdancer15 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 5:29 pm :
turn the frown the other way around
 
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BrittyBrit said...
May 21, 2013 at 5:15 pm:
THIS WAS AMAZING!!!!  FANTASTIC JOBBBBB, KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK :)
 
Kittycatdancer15 replied...
May 21, 2013 at 5:17 pm :
Thank you so much <3
 
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alone.15.forever said...
May 20, 2013 at 7:23 pm:
That was beautiful. well written. it basically descibes how almost every girl feels.
 
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poeticqueen said...
May 20, 2013 at 7:15 pm:
Your poem describes what alot of girls go through. Your really good.
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 20, 2013 at 7:10 pm:
This is good. Don't get me wrong....I just feel it's been DONE before, ya know? It needed a little something....unique......I don't know. Still good! 4 1/2 stars :D
 
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