April 26, 2013
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Roses, so delicate, so pure,
Running the petals over my lips, the soft sensation,
Does your lips feel like rose petals?
Red Roses, like the deepest of blushes,
Do you blush as red as a rose?
I give a rose but never take.
I give you a rose of the deepest of red,
For giving a rose will tell you everything,
Everything that I can't say.
Roses, so delicate, so pure,
I give you this rose, for it is my heart.

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nelehjr This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 3, 2013 at 12:50 am
Love poems. Insufferable monstrosities, I love them! This one was one of the better ones. Good. Keep writing. Only thing I'd change though is "Does you lips lips feel like rose petals?" "Do your lips feel like rose petals?" Really though. Great job. I like how you compared your heart to a flower. Also, I must now addmit I have double motives...A long while ago I believe it was you who commented on one of my peices titled Adrift. Well I went bac... (more »)
FallenAngel170198 replied...
Nov. 17, 2013 at 7:51 pm
Thank you, I don't believe you are a kiss-up, I will deifinently read your story again :) Thank you for liking my poem :D
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