Always One Step Behind

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I'm always in last place, never better than anyone.



I'm always in last place, trying so hard , but never really there.
Seems to me that I will always be one step behind, doubting and wishing
That one day- I will be victorious, But there's one problem.....

I'm always One Step Behind.





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Tanis,the,apple said...
Oct. 8, 2014 at 9:34 pm
I've felt exactly like that a lot throughout my life and it really hits home when I think about it  
 
SweetlyBeautiful said...
Jun. 25, 2013 at 3:37 pm
Thank you all!!  
 
liberalartist said...
Jun. 5, 2013 at 9:56 pm
Awesome job *very happy face*
 
HoldingHerHand This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 28, 2013 at 9:56 pm
This poem has a longing feel to it... Its so sad. But it's good so here's a posotive comment. *thumbs up*
 
SweetlyBeautiful replied...
Jun. 1, 2013 at 5:37 pm
Lol thanks for the * thumbs up * I appreciate it
 
roseycub said...
May 17, 2013 at 6:46 pm
Good first poem!  
 
BekahBoo said...
May 16, 2013 at 7:06 pm
I can completly relate to this. Fantastic Poem.
 
Ali101 replied...
May 16, 2013 at 7:46 pm
thanks  
 
SunballSunny said...
May 16, 2013 at 3:27 pm
i luv it Ali i really do it is how i feel at times
 
Ali101 said...
May 15, 2013 at 10:41 pm
I appeciate all of the comments that was posted on my first article, and I will continue! You will see more soon!  
 
Jade.I.Am This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2013 at 10:37 pm
This okay, I can see what you were trying to do here, with the repetition. Fell a little flat, but that's okay, it's still good! :D keep it up!
 
Kittycatdancer15 said...
May 15, 2013 at 10:29 pm
great job for your first poem!! you were born a writer.
 
Ali101 replied...
May 15, 2013 at 10:31 pm
thanks  
 
alone.15.forever said...
May 15, 2013 at 10:25 pm
Great job..very well written
 
AugustSummerFling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2013 at 9:41 pm
Welcome to TeenInk :) Many people feel this way. As if they're not good enough or pretty enough. But you need to believe in yourself and keep moving ahead :) put in your best and you'll surely get to the top ! Eager to read more of your work :)
 
Ali101 replied...
May 15, 2013 at 10:25 pm
thank you sooo much. I have more up-comming ,a nd your 2
 
Ellodan said...
May 15, 2013 at 7:34 pm
Loads of emotion in this! Very good!
 
Mckay This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15, 2013 at 7:10 pm
I relate to his. I feel the emotion you display. It feels raw and at the same time empowering. It motaivates me to continue to not ve that last person. But aim to be the first. i love it. And you should write more ASAP. Glad to have met you.
 
Ali101 replied...
May 15, 2013 at 7:18 pm
You too, and Im in the process of writing more
 
Ali101 said...
May 13, 2013 at 11:15 pm
This is my very first post!Any comments would be great. Thanks 
 
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