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Let my feelings for you
be measured by the length
of computer wire
And present in the hum
that goes on forever
like the beating of my heart
The clacking of keys
that is heard on both ends
makes us one,
makes us whole
But it is really
the path of the arrow
on my brightly glowing screen
as I trace your words
that points out the strong bond
between us



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JRayeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 11:27 am:
This is extremely well written, just amazing! A lot of people can relate to it, and I've never read anything like it before. Great job!
 
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Dr.SSLMThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
yesterday at 7:03 pm:
This is amazing!! :D I love it ;3 Good job.. :3 5/5 stars
 
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