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The Dance of Fall

Fall runs in like a tiger,
through a field,
the leaves jump in with all,
the dullness they wield.
Winds hum their songs,
with blowing,
and the air starts shivering,
then when it's all over,
fall runs away,
then the next visitor,
winter,
travels to stay free,
and the air froze,
the words of fall,
have finally,
been spoken.



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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10, 2013 at 2:29 pm:
1). I love the title you chose. Excellent title for this piece. 2). The personification you use brings the poem to life. You make the seasons come to life, giving them little personalities.  3). As Jade said, the imagery is vivid, start to finish.
 
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Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 8:46 pm:
Heyo! XD your poem is really good, I liked the last line especially. I love imagery so bang up job XD
 
TheNamesBond.....JamesBond This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 6:21 pm :
Thanks, I aprreciate it
 
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