Report Abuse Home > Poetry > Free Verse > Strength Strength By Emotsye, Syracuse, NY More by this author « Previous article More by this author Next article » Join the Discussion This article has 3 comments. Post your own! Report abuse Julia K. said... Apr. 23, 2013 at 3:57 pm: Thank you for your feedback! I did actually make this into a longer poem which you can see here: TeenInk.com/poetry/free_verse/article/543626/Strength-20/ Report abuse Mariesummers said... Apr. 19, 2013 at 4:08 pm: I love this! It is very powerfull. I think it is a beautiful peice but see it as a hook. I think you should make this part of a larger piece or poem. Report abuse CrystalAngelDol said... Apr. 18, 2013 at 1:17 pm: nice, but why is it so short?