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April 9, 2013
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I never knew words could be so strong but then yours carried my breath in one hand and my heart in the other.

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Julia K. said...
Apr. 23, 2013 at 3:57 pm
Thank you for your feedback! I did actually make this into a longer poem which you can see here:
Mariesummers said...
Apr. 19, 2013 at 4:08 pm
I love this! It is very powerfull. I think it is a beautiful peice but see it as a hook. I think you should make this part of a larger piece or poem. 
CrystalAngelDol said...
Apr. 18, 2013 at 1:17 pm
 nice, but why is it so short?
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