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I never knew words could be so strong but then yours carried my breath in one hand and my heart in the other.



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Julia K. said...
Apr. 23 at 3:57 pm:
Thank you for your feedback! I did actually make this into a longer poem which you can see here: http://www.teenink.com/poetry/free_verse/article/543626/Strength-20/
 
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MariesummersThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 19 at 4:08 pm:
I love this! It is very powerfull. I think it is a beautiful peice but see it as a hook. I think you should make this part of a larger piece or poem. 
 
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CrystalAngelDolThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18 at 1:17 pm:
 nice, but why is it so short?
 
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