falling down the rabbit hole

April 10, 2013
By Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
10 articles 3 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, so long as one remembers to turn on the light.


I wake up in this unfamiliar place
Surrounded by all these people I thought I knew.
What is all this,

Double meanings and hidden messages,
I must make sense of this deadly game
Or I shall die.

I am trapped
In this deadly dance of words
Where is the world I used to know?

Have I fallen down the rabbit hole
Into the real world?

Oh how I wish that I could climb out of this strange Place,but once in,
You can never leave.
Wish that I could just climb



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on Jun. 6 2013 at 12:01 pm
Potterhead_Is_amazing GOLD, Arvada, Colorado
10 articles 3 photos 38 comments

Favorite Quote:
Happiness can be found even in the darkest of times, so long as one remembers to turn on the light.

Thanks!I actually submitted it before i was done.In my head there was a much better ending :)

on Jun. 6 2013 at 11:58 am
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is really really cool, i always love an Alice in Wonderland reference. I think your ending could have been stronger, or phrased differently, but i still liked it :) 4 and a half/5 :) 

on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:24 pm
AugustSummerFling PLATINUM, Mylapore, Chennai, Other
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Favorite Quote:
'For you, a thousand times over.' - Hassan, The Kite Runner

A professional writer is an amateur who didn't quit.

I could relate to this a lot! The people that you thought you knew quite well, all of a sudden they change(show their true face) and you just wish you had never entered into their world of politics and drama! I loved the irony in the forth stanza! Great job! :)

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on Apr. 18 2013 at 3:58 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

This is simply spectacular. Seriously. the message, metaphors, and allusions to Alice in Wonderland. Brilliant. My favorite line is "dealy dance of words". Awesome *Barney Stinson style*


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