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Knew not

April 4, 2013
By x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star


I can't lose another one
are road; are journey can not be done
this can't be it
this won't be the end
I just can't lose another friend
I had a premonition of that life i was missin
The life you were missing in
Where I did not smile Nor did I grin
I don't remember the reason why you got rid
I did not have a clue
I knew not what I did


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GreyGirl ELITE said...
on May. 4 2013 at 2:28 am
GreyGirl ELITE, Pohang,Kyungbuk, Other
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Not your best poem. You misspelled "our" as "are" and the theme was a little muddled. Keep trying!

x_rbdf GOLD said...
on Apr. 28 2013 at 2:17 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
17 articles 1 photo 47 comments

Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Thanks,And conventions was never really "My thing" but im happy you like it :)

on Apr. 26 2013 at 8:01 pm
drumsrawesome GOLD, Bethel, Vermont
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"Our." I  believe you're confusing "are" with "our." Seems like a deep poem though.