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Heart

March 25, 2013
By Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"


heart
How can I give my heart when I'm afraid,
How can I look to you and feel trust,
I am crumbling,broken I feel nothing,
But when I see you my heart aches again,
Why do you do this to me?
I don't know I am heartless,
My heart turning to scars and dust,
It beats but not feel, who am I?
I don't know I am different,
You changed me but to better to worse no one will know,
I look to you and my eyes with tears sparkle,
you are me and I am you but how do I tell you,
that your everything that you,
How can a tree shed it's leaves if it knows it will die,
how can the sea make waves that could destroy everything,
how can love be trusted once you've been betrayed,
how can I let you in when I'm afraid to fall.
Would you caught me or laugh as I fall to the ground,
would you strip my wings away,
or would you save me,
How am I the one who have to feel this way when others love with no regrets,
How is it fair that I am betrayed when others are happy,
how is it I give you my heart and you crush it beneath you,
how is it that I am heartless now,
a cold statue where a heart should lie,
instead it lies in the bottom of the stony heart as dust,
no longer beating, no longer loving,
until someones saves it and me



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on Jan. 24 2014 at 5:12 pm
Nella.Girl97 BRONZE, Ashland, Wisconsin
1 article 0 photos 437 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Keep on dreaming even if it breaks your heart."

all i can say is wow! this is so relateable im almost crying! Thanks so much for this poem!

Zolenz DIAMOND said...
on Aug. 1 2013 at 12:38 pm
Zolenz DIAMOND, Musquodoboit Harbour, NS, Other
65 articles 0 photos 177 comments

Favorite Quote:
The pain that have cost us, the evils which have never happened.
- Thomas Jefferson

yes this is amazing youre amazing and I connect so much to this right now! I wrote one or 2 about the same thing! keep writing!

on Apr. 17 2013 at 9:08 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

sure you can frame it lol :P

swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2013 at 9:07 pm
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
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Wow, this is great. I love the message. You do an awesome job writing free verse!

swat17 SILVER said...
on Apr. 17 2013 at 9:06 pm
swat17 SILVER, Mineral, Virginia
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Wow, this is great. I love the message. You do a great job with free verse!

on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:53 pm
mistaken_laughter PLATINUM, Alvin, Texas
21 articles 0 photos 44 comments

Favorite Quote:
"There are three rules to writing a novel. Unfortunately, no one knows what they are." W. Somerset Maugham

:O can I like frame this? It's gorgeous. I love being able to read something that I can relate to, but that doesn't happen very often, but here is one of those rare pieces!

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 15 2013 at 4:51 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Wow...................... Speechless. Three words...... WRITE> MORE<PLEASE!!!! Ur sooo talented!  

on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:51 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

Thank you :3

on Apr. 3 2013 at 8:23 pm
LexusMarie PLATINUM, Las Cruces, New Mexico
27 articles 0 photos 423 comments

Favorite Quote:
The more control you have over yourself, the less control others have over you.

Hello! These lines are priceless.. "How can a tree shed it's leaves if it knows it will die,
how can the sea make waves that could destroy everything,
how can love be trusted once you've been betrayed,
how can I let you in when I'm afraid to fall." You are an AMAZING writer. I felt all the emotion and hard work put into this. This is truly something special. Great job! You're great! Xx!

on Apr. 3 2013 at 4:32 pm
Fallen_ PLATINUM, Quakertown, Pennsylvania
25 articles 3 photos 436 comments

Favorite Quote:
" a shattered world is only an opening into a new beginning with laughs, smiles, and love all around enter the world of the light and away from the broken darkness"

thanks i really apprehiate this :3

mnm08 BRONZE said...
on Apr. 3 2013 at 3:27 pm
mnm08 BRONZE, Grande Prairie, Texas
2 articles 0 photos 69 comments

Favorite Quote:
"A writer needs the industry of an ant, the creativity of a kitten and the hid of an armadillo."- Author Unknown

wow, that was really nice to read =) I love the imagery of the tree shedding it's leaves and about the waves of the sea the most. I can tell that this really came from u and u honestly didn't hold back. Good job!! :) 

on Apr. 3 2013 at 6:32 am
Ray--yo PLATINUM, Kathmandu, Other
43 articles 2 photos 581 comments

Favorite Quote:
God Makes No Mistakes. (Gaga?)
"I have hated the words and I have loved them, and I hope I have made them right." -Liesel Meminger via Markus Zusac, "The Book Thief"

u r so creative!! the metaphors in the middle r amazing!


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