My Chemical Romance

March 24, 2013
I wasn't told.
I had no clue.
I wasn't even aware of you

My tears were shed
But now they're done
Because you touched almost everyone

I wasn't sure what to say
No one felt like I did
It was my saddest day

Yet only hours after crying
Feeling depressed, lonely, dying
Did I remember what you stood for

Hope, dreams, flying
You picked me up
You kept my going, always trying

You may be gone
But others say
That you'll be back again some day

So I won't worry
I'll just wait
For my hope to be replaced.

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Krasota This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Apr. 30, 2013 at 3:33 pm
I LOVE MCR! Such an amazing band ^_^ I love the optimism towards the end. My suggestion for growth in writing would be to go back and search for any vague/general lines and make them more specific. For example, "No one felt like I did" is pretty generic. However, I like how you later went back and described those feelings that no one else could possibly have felt. :D Have a great day!
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