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There's a Girl in my closet
She Cries and she weeps
There's a Girl in my closet
A broken heart she keeps

she Cries at midnight
till morning breaks through
She tells me her story
and what she used to do

Her eyes are like clouds
Tears like endless rain
Her cries are not loud
But she's hurting with pain

No-one ever listened
She she cried all alone
Hiding in my closet
The place she calls home

The girl in my closet told me a secret
and with all of my heart i vowed i would keep it
she told me a secret that made my toes curl
the secret she told me was I AM the little girl.



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TargonTheDragonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Aug. 2, 2013 at 2:50 pm
this is beautiful. great job!
 
Jade.I.AmThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Aug. 1, 2013 at 9:55 pm
I really like the rhythm to this, and it was beautiful in a sad way. Great job with the metaphor, it was cool. 
 
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May 10, 2013 at 8:59 am
It was beautiful to read, you've expressed your thoughts so well! and the poem's quite relatable as well to me, awesome!
 
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