Day After Day

March 14, 2013
By Cutey-Beauty SILVER, Ulaanbaator, Other
Cutey-Beauty SILVER, Ulaanbaator, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Soli Deo Gloria.


Day after Day
I watch him
Silently stalking behind him
Hiding a smile beneath my fingers

Day after Day
I call him
Wondering what he could be doing
And smiling when I hear his voice

Day after Day
I glance at him
Imagining his handsome face
For the thousandth time

Day after Day
I wonder about him
Why does he do this or that?
Are these feelings my best friend or greatest enemy?

Day after Day
I *like him
Wishing he *liked me
And wondering what I'd do if he did

Day after Day
I guard myself
Trying to keep the strings of my heart untangled
And keeping it's contents well hidden


The author's comments:
This defines how a crush works. You wonder and wonder, but cannot reach a conclusion until you find a way to move on. I wrote this when I was 13 or 12.

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OldYoungOne said...
on Aug. 6 2013 at 3:56 pm
An innocent crush I can understand. Hey I am sorry that I havrn't gotten to reading and commenting sooner btu I havr fufilled the my end of deal Changed was what I wanted you to read.

on May. 13 2013 at 1:13 pm
Triscuits BRONZE, Vinton, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"She may be tragically beautiful, but I'm beautifully tragic"

You captured the feeling of a first crush perfectly! This is exactly how you feel when you find the first person you really like, and it's amazing and happy and scary and confusing all at once.

OldYoungOne said...
on Apr. 23 2013 at 7:28 pm
Its cute. reminds me and my juvenile ways lol

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 19 2013 at 1:54 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Thanks. I too appreciated the wonderful cooments you gave me. :D

Hanban12 ELITE said...
on Apr. 18 2013 at 4:52 pm
Hanban12 ELITE, Lake Worth, Florida
133 articles 7 photos 633 comments

Favorite Quote:
"If you have built castles in the air, your work need not be lost; that is where they should be. Now put foundations under them."
Henry David Thoreau

"I fell in love the way you fall asleep; slowly, and then all at once."
John Green

Wow, really great! You really do have a gift for emotion... im sure everyone can relate to this poem :)

on Apr. 18 2013 at 9:52 am
Cutey-Beauty SILVER, Ulaanbaator, Other
6 articles 0 photos 65 comments

Favorite Quote:
Soli Deo Gloria.

Thank you for all your beautiful comments on my pieces of poetry, I really appreciate it :) You're such a great poet too!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Apr. 17 2013 at 3:30 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
146 articles 0 photos 2260 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I adore your emotion in your poetry. You've a talent for displaying it without being melodramatic. Keep writing, sister. 


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