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The Whirl

March 18, 2013
By Nagini95 BRONZE, Lahore, Other
Nagini95 BRONZE, Lahore, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
''If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way''
(Will Rogers)


When days were young,
There was laughter around,
Carefree days,
Not a worry in mind!
Playing about,
Laughing our hearts out,
Inventing games and sharing n caring,
Things n thoughts,
Hand in hand,
Together we walked.
In the quick whirl of life those times faded,
Now carefree is not a word,
Worry a constant pain,
Sober expressions,
Laughter died,
Games expired,
Sharing is what?!
Thoughts tarnished,
Confined in a shell,
Like a rat in a bottle;
No greetings,
No waves,
But there was a goodbye!


The author's comments:
A lost friend of mine inspired this poem.

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on Apr. 13 2013 at 5:31 pm
Nagini95 BRONZE, Lahore, Other
3 articles 1 photo 3 comments

Favorite Quote:
''If you cannot do great things, do small things in a great way''
(Will Rogers)

Thank You! :)

ZoieRose GOLD said...
on Mar. 29 2013 at 6:55 pm
ZoieRose GOLD, Olympia, Washington
11 articles 1 photo 7 comments

Favorite Quote:
People don't always put up walls to keep other people out, sometimes they put up walls to see who's strong enough to break them down

I really like this. \