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Sleep in your arms tonight:
Rubbing fingers
Holding me safe and tight
Hearing the whispers of your slumbering breathe
Watching pain go up in smoke
Because your here

Flooding love through my veins
My body is screaming for more
And it feels so good
Because you’re here

The worry disappears
And the calm waves air through us
Like a magical wand

Our hearts beat in sync

At once

Quickly

Speeding up the race

For a kiss long awaited

Loving to touch you
Feeling secure
Our lips beg to be united
And your sleep is peaceful
Quiet
Serene

Feeling
Safe

Sleeping in
Your arms

Nights




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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 8:43 pm:
Very intimate :) I like the feelings running through the different stanzas
 
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Sunny225LuvsHugsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 8:17 pm:
i like it so romantic
 
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Mr.Right said...
yesterday at 9:01 pm:
Its GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!
 
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readaholicThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
yesterday at 7:26 pm:
Overall, this is pretty good.  Some little spelling things (blarg).  I would use a little more imargry, more interesting word choice, just to make it really pop.  But other than that, it flows nicely, just needs something to set it apart
 
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