Nights

March 18, 2013
By Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
Basya44 PLATINUM, Brighton, Massachusetts
36 articles 1 photo 77 comments

Sleep in your arms tonight:
Rubbing fingers
Holding me safe and tight
Hearing the whispers of your slumbering breathe
Watching pain go up in smoke
Because your here

Flooding love through my veins
My body is screaming for more
And it feels so good
Because you’re here

The worry disappears
And the calm waves air through us
Like a magical wand

Our hearts beat in sync

At once

Quickly

Speeding up the race

For a kiss long awaited

Loving to touch you
Feeling secure
Our lips beg to be united
And your sleep is peaceful
Quiet
Serene

Feeling
Safe

Sleeping in
Your arms

Nights



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on Mar. 23 2013 at 8:43 pm
Sparkle1pops PLATINUM, Colorado Springs, Colorado
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Favorite Quote:
"No great artist ever sees things as they really are. If he did, he would cease to be an artist."
- Oscar Wilde

Very intimate :) I like the feelings running through the different stanzas

on Mar. 23 2013 at 8:17 pm
SunnyDreams BRONZE, Niger Falls, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Can you feel what I have seen, when no one else has lived through what I have?-HalveOfLife

i like it so romantic

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on Mar. 22 2013 at 9:01 pm
x_rbdf GOLD, Augusta, Georgia
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Favorite Quote:
He who faces give no light shall never become a star

Its GREAT!!!!!!!!!!!

on Mar. 22 2013 at 7:26 pm
readaholic PLATINUM, Tomahawk, Wisconsin
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Favorite Quote:
I'd rather fail because I fell on my own face than fall because someone tripped me up
~Jhonen Vasquez

Overall, this is pretty good.  Some little spelling things (blarg).  I would use a little more imargry, more interesting word choice, just to make it really pop.  But other than that, it flows nicely, just needs something to set it apart


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