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Your voice is in my ears,
I’m listening.

Your smile is in my dreams,
I’m waking.

Your name is on my lips,
I’m screaming.

Your love is in my heart,
I’m breaking.





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Firelover said...
Dec. 12, 2013 at 11:23 am
There are no words that can describe this fully describe, so I'll do my best :p truly amazing :)
 
half.note replied...
Dec. 13, 2013 at 9:20 pm
Hey, thanks, Firelover. I'm glad you liked it. :)
 
Superhero_Fan said...
Sept. 3, 2013 at 9:22 pm
Woah! That was beautiful Half.note! Eight lines? How did you do that. Please keep writing!
 
half.note replied...
Dec. 13, 2013 at 9:23 pm
Oops, I never keep up with comments.... Anyways, thank you, Superhero_Fan. ^u^
 
Doctorbug said...
Aug. 12, 2013 at 11:41 pm
Magic. Pure magic. The shortest tends to be the sweatest. I don't know how you do it.
 
half.note replied...
Dec. 13, 2013 at 9:25 pm
How do I do it? ...Magic. *waves hand in a rainbow formation*
 
packerbacker12_aka_the_illiterate_aka_kdogThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 1:25 pm
i think a lot of people can relate to this, nice job!
 
half.note replied...
Mar. 27, 2013 at 11:22 pm
Thanks, packerbacker. :D  God bless. ♥
 
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