Long Distance

March 11, 2013
By carcar SILVER, Mundelein, Illinois
carcar SILVER, Mundelein, Illinois
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A relationship like a dying fish
Slowly sinking to the bottom
At first it seemed like they were taking a break
Until that break never resumed

No matter how much they kept in touch
And tried to feed their hearts with love
They couldn’t stop this relationship from dying
It was something beyond their control

They didn’t want that love to end
But distance got the best of them
Sometimes it’s better to let it sink slowly
Than have it drown and swallow them whole


The author's comments:
all good things must come to an end.

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carcar SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2013 at 10:01 pm
carcar SILVER, Mundelein, Illinois
5 articles 0 photos 2 comments
thank you! I appreciate the feedback!

carcar SILVER said...
on Mar. 20 2013 at 9:59 pm
carcar SILVER, Mundelein, Illinois
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thank you so much!

on Mar. 20 2013 at 7:35 pm
DarkBlueBaby BRONZE, Chestnut Ridge, New York
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Favorite Quote:
"Why fit in when you were born to stand out?" ~ Dr. Seuss
"Never let the fear of striking out keep you from playing the game."

Wow. I love this. It shows the true emotions that come with having a long distance relationship. I can completely relate. Amazing job; 5 stars!! :D

on Mar. 20 2013 at 12:17 pm
HouseofYork GOLD, Powhatan, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"...Time and Chance happened to them all." Ecc 9:11

As irony would have it this poem fits my current situation perfectly (3/20). You are missing some periods however, but well done nonetheless 5/5


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