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Boiling anger
Hurt inside
Glaring gaze
Selfish pride.

A cry for mercy
Hits the ears
Of a dying heart
That cannot hear.

Waves of fury
Ebb no more.
The door unlocks
No longer sore.

A hand is laid
On the dying heart
The ire inside
Now depart.



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Rebel21This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
May 23 at 8:04 pm:
This is beautiful and wonderfully worded!
 
freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 12:44 pm :
Thank u :)
 
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freepersonThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19 at 7:12 pm:
Yeah I kinda thought it up during church...so...thank u!!
 
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pulledheartstringThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19 at 2:23 am:
This sounds like some ancient legend that can be read during a movie or something... or maybe it's just my imagination at night. xD Either way, good job! As you can see... I read it in a dramatic way.
 
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