Forgiven

March 3, 2013
By freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston


Boiling anger
Hurt inside
Glaring gaze
Selfish pride.

A cry for mercy
Hits the ears
Of a dying heart
That cannot hear.

Waves of fury
Ebb no more.
The door unlocks
No longer sore.

A hand is laid
On the dying heart
The ire inside
Now depart.



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on May. 25 2013 at 12:44 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
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Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Thank u :)

on May. 23 2013 at 8:04 pm
Rebel21 PLATINUM, St. Catharines, Other
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Favorite Quote:
Where there is desire, there is gonna be a flame,
Where there is a flame someone's bound to get burned.
Just because it burns doesn't mean you're gonna die,
You've got to get up and try.

This is beautiful and wonderfully worded!

on Mar. 19 2013 at 7:12 pm
freeperson DIAMOND, Burlington, Vermont
60 articles 0 photos 230 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Have you seen the way he looks at you, the way his expression softens and his eyes are like stars...?" - Ara Weston

Yeah I kinda thought it up during church...so...thank u!!

on Mar. 19 2013 at 2:23 am
pulledheartstring, San Jose, California
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Favorite Quote:
The weak can never forgive. Forgiveness is the attribute of the strong. -- Mahatma Gandhi

This sounds like some ancient legend that can be read during a movie or something... or maybe it's just my imagination at night. xD Either way, good job! As you can see... I read it in a dramatic way.


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