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Choke

Do you ever feel like the world is spinning too fast?
That you’re caught in some kind of time lapse?
You hear the echo of laughing
You see others passing
but you feel alone.
You’re out of breath.
You’re out of time.
You feel the world collapse.
And you know that you’re
going to
choke.



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FemmeGeek This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 8:22 pm
I like this a lot! I know the exact feeling you're talking about. Please check out my poem TeenInk.com/poetry/all/article/526057/Untitled/ and let me know what you think.
 
SuperiorMischief said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 6:25 pm
This gives the reader raw emotion.i love it!!!
 
BlueRoses14 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 5:16 pm
Thanks you guys! And 16charbonneaum...wonder who you are :P
 
16charbonneaum said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 5:06 pm
i like these words. these words are good.
 
babygirl19 said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 3:00 pm
i feel the same all the time  
 
Funkyman said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 2:15 pm
I feel the same about it
 
sadesdd said...
Mar. 6, 2013 at 9:33 am
I agree, sometimes we choke all day.
 
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