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Do you ever feel like the world is spinning too fast?
That you’re caught in some kind of time lapse?
You hear the echo of laughing
You see others passing
but you feel alone.
You’re out of breath.
You’re out of time.
You feel the world collapse.
And you know that you’re
going to
choke.




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FemmeGeek said...
Mar. 6 at 8:22 pm:
I like this a lot! I know the exact feeling you're talking about. Please check out my poem http://www.teenink.com/poetry/all/article/526057/Untitled/ and let me know what you think.
 
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SuperiorMischief said...
Mar. 6 at 6:25 pm:
This gives the reader raw emotion.i love it!!!
 
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BlueRoses14 said...
Mar. 6 at 5:16 pm:
Thanks you guys! And 16charbonneaum...wonder who you are :P
 
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16charbonneaum said...
Mar. 6 at 5:06 pm:
i like these words. these words are good.
 
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babygirl19 said...
Mar. 6 at 3:00 pm:
i feel the same all the time  
 
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Funkyman said...
Mar. 6 at 2:15 pm:
I feel the same about it
 
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sadesddThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 6 at 9:33 am:
I agree, sometimes we choke all day.
 
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