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Our Goodbyes
February 22, 2013
Our Love Once Failed Us,
Because We Weren’t Strong Together.
I Once Thought That You Had Stolen My Heart
But You Just Rented
I Thought We Would Stay Together Forever,
That’s why I Showed You the Parts of Me That Weren’t All That Pretty.
But You Decided That It Was Time To Leave
You’ve Had Enough Of Our Love </3
Before We Close Our Eyes and Turn Off the Lights,
I Have to Tell You a Secret I’ve Held Inside
It’s You That I Live for and for You I Would Die
© Rebecca Y., Los Angeles, CA
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KkatKreationz PLATINUM said...
on Jun. 6 2013 at 11:46 am
Not that i need to commment. Everyone else pretty much said it all. :) Your good.
NadiaFilanovsky SILVER said...
on Mar. 7 2013 at 9:41 pm
I really love this poem, i gave it 5/5 stars! Anyways, I think it's very literal. This is totally a writer's choice thing, but I think you could make this beautiful poem even more emotional if you tried using some figurative phrases. It's hard, I struggle with the same thing in my poems. Nonethless, this piece is brilliant *applause for you*
