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Land and Ocean

February 22, 2013
By Cieloxsiempre BRONZE, Fishers, Indiana
Cieloxsiempre BRONZE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
"We judge people for judging people because judging people is wrong"


My eyes
Is never ending
Mud
Dirt
And dust
You look through it
And you'll eventually get bored
Of its desert
And would rather visit
My blue eyed sister
That'll surely quench your thirst
Because explorers
Never last here



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on Mar. 6 2013 at 3:47 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

*line* not like...

on Mar. 6 2013 at 3:46 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

It's callie, btw:). Aww, I loved his! I loved the metaphor, and what it's about..... My only criticism is grammar—the second like should be "are never ending" instead of "is". But I'm in love with this poem XD