The Love Constitution MAG

August 27, 2008
By Jenna B., Scottsville, NY, Scottsville, NY

Forgive and forget.
I promise not to forget you.
In the rustling of the leaves
I hear a song for two:

It’s coming,
the conclusion,
we can hear it from afar.
A constitution,
resolution,
confusion’s door was left ajar.
A lady,
a mission,
bringing closure to us all.
We worry and we scurry
when coldness comes in for a brawl.
A contusion.
An illusion.
The pictures on your wall.
You remember,
mid-November,
we tried but we failed.
But when the spring came
and cleared up our same
it brought closure to us all.
A collision.
A decision.
A fly on the wall.



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on Sep. 17 2012 at 3:25 pm
AngelBaron PLATINUM, Dallas, Oregon
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Favorite Quote:
"Everything has been figured out, except how to live. " -Jean-Paul Sartre

beauitful and articulate

on Dec. 6 2011 at 4:07 am
youngspeare BRONZE, Nairobi, Other
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Favorite Quote:
We wouldn't ask a rose that grew from the concrete for having damaged petals; in turn we'd all celebrate its tenacity, we'd all love tz will to reach the sun well we are the roses n these are my damaged petals don't ask me why thank God and ask me how

Awesome job! Keep writing. 
Check out my poem "Ghosts of the Past" and rate/comment? Would appreciate it. 

on Nov. 14 2011 at 9:33 pm
Jakethesnake SILVER, Hernando, Mississippi
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Favorite Quote:
"Read, Read... Read everything, then write."-William Faulkner

This poem is great! If you would add more to it or write one like this and make it more detailed (such as adding a little more about the fall, when  I assume this all began, and more on the winter, or the hard times. Then, finish it off with more simili's with Spring) it will be perfect.

on Nov. 14 2011 at 11:28 am
illosionist GOLD, St.helen, Michigan
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Favorite Quote:
"I don't listen to Genres of music; i listen to good artist." -forgot xD
" Passion is My Motivation" -Me

it's different, it original...i do think i have seen something new today, lovely. ^_^

on Jul. 27 2011 at 9:18 am
Mimi15 PLATINUM, Belfast, Maine
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This is super good! Check out my poem "Lovely" (:

spency SILVER said...
on Jun. 13 2011 at 11:19 am
spency SILVER, Irvington, New Jersey
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Favorite Quote:
"DON'T GIVE UP,REACH YOURSELF UP"

5/5 good job...visit me comment and rate

Ky2332 said...
on May. 22 2011 at 7:47 pm
Alls I could say when I was done reading it was WOW!!!! keep up the good work!

Apeggy BRONZE said...
on Feb. 2 2011 at 12:39 pm
Apeggy BRONZE, Albion, New York
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Favorite Quote:
A.B.D"A Beautiful Dream"

I love this poem! You are very talented.

on Nov. 11 2010 at 9:25 am
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House

I love this poem soo much it is absolutly fantastic!

on Oct. 27 2010 at 10:37 pm
SideraCaeli GOLD, Marysville, Washington
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Favorite Quote:
“Be yourself. Above all, let who you are, what you are, what you believe, shine through every sentence you write, every piece you finish.” -John Jakes.

I love this, I can relate

on Sep. 22 2010 at 9:51 am
SaMiLoVe97 SILVER, Okawville, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
If it doesnt break your heart it isnt love, if it doesnt break your heart its not enough. Its when youre breaking down with your insides coming out.Thats when you learn what youre made of.-Switchfoot<3

OHMYGOD!!!! i am in LOVE with Pink Floyd. i taught my 3 yr old cousin all tha words to "wish you were here" (: beautiful poem btw. lol

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on Sep. 16 2010 at 7:42 am
bergert BRONZE, Spotsylvania, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"When life gives you lemons, you have to make lemonade...or else you look like an idiot standing there holding lemons."-Melissa Graulich

This reminded me of a song lyric: "when the spring arrived, we were taken by surprise when the flows under our feet bled into the sea, and nothing was left of you and me."

I really love this poem. I loved how you wrote it, and how it took the reader through an entire year. You had me hooked at the first stanza. (:


on Aug. 31 2010 at 7:20 pm
Shadow913 SILVER, Hinckley, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember what they say. 'There's no shortcut to a dream. It's all blood and sweat, and life is what you manage in between."' -Lyrics from "October" by Broken Bells

I love Pink Floyd!! Especially Comfortably Numb, Wish You Were Here, and Have a Cigar. Time is good too(:

on Aug. 9 2010 at 11:29 pm
Darkness95 SILVER, McFarland, California
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Favorite Quote:
"Carpe Diem. Seize the day!"

This poem is great and insightful. Love it! :)

on Apr. 21 2010 at 6:05 am
Dunkelheitstieg BRONZE, Baldwin, Florida
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Favorite Quote:
"The poet ranks far below the painter in the representation of visible things, and far below the musician in that of invisible things. Why does the eye see a thing more clearly in dreams than the imagination when awake?,"Leonardo da Vinci.

this is so wonderful, i decided to find a quote for u:"There is no pain you are receding A distant ship, smoke on the horizon. You are only coming through in waves. Your lips move but I can't hear what you're saying. When I was a child I had a fever My hands felt just like two balloons. Now I've got that feeling once again I can't explain you would not understand This is not how I am. I have become comfortably numb. "
- Pink Floyd

on Apr. 20 2010 at 2:35 am
mcpanicfanic SILVER, Cincinnati, Ohio
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Love it! Simply love it! Read muh poem!!!!!!!!

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on Jan. 29 2010 at 12:38 am
j-rye SILVER, Toronto, Other
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Favorite Quote:
When the power of love overcomes the love of power, the world will know peace - Jimi Hendrix

it had a really nice rhythm to it.

please comment on my work!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 2:31 pm
bluegirl440 DIAMOND, Park City, Utah
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Favorite Quote:
Everybody lies. -House

this a fantastic poem! Keep writing!

on Jan. 7 2010 at 8:24 am
mutekid016 GOLD, Gap, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
"Remember when you play like a girl used to be an insult?" Mia Hamm

It's really emotional and rhymes are beautiful.

on Apr. 2 2009 at 9:52 pm
Laurennnn PLATINUM, Sadieville, Kentucky
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Favorite Quote:
"To live is the rarest thing in the world. Most people merely exist, that is all." -Oscar Wilde

I really enjoyed reading this.


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