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Hell turns to ice
When she's lying in bed,
(With a halo's glow wrapped round' her head)
If I'd pick twice
At my logical threads
(like the teddy bear she holds in the medicine bed)

I'd have a mind to think she'd pass, tonight.

Yet I breathe at the pace
That the heart machine makes
(Just to feel that she's closer than face to face)
Somehow, I'm finding
A hope that swells
(That bounces like raindrops to a wishing's well)



And I'd bet my coins that
There could be butterflies

Drawn from the curves of the monitor's lines.




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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 10 at 2:36 pm:
From that first line, you captured my attention. And you held it till the end. Wow. This is a wondrous poem. I wanna re-read it over and over again.
 
MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILovedYouThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
today at 9:54 am :
Thank you VERY much, Mckay!
 
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laurengerhardThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 7 at 1:31 pm:
Kylie, your writing is phenomonal.
 
MaybeImCrazyButIThinkILovedYouThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Apr. 10 at 7:34 pm :
Thank you so much, Lauren! That means the world to me!
 
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