friends

February 20, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
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Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu


I have these crazy friends
That will be with me until the very end
These friends of mine
Help me realize
My fears
And help me wipe away my tears
Because those that care
Stay and play there part
And l leave an impression I on our hearts



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on Jul. 17 2013 at 2:20 pm
sophistryxo SILVER, St. Louis, Missouri
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Favorite Quote:
“There was nowhere to go but everywhere, so just keep on rolling under the stars.”
-Jack Kerouac

This is very simple and cute-great work!

Kris_10 GOLD said...
on May. 13 2013 at 9:39 pm
Kris_10 GOLD, North Scituate, Rhode Island
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Favorite Quote:
"It is not the critic who counts; not the man who points out how the strong man stumbles... The credit belongs to the man who is actually in the arena, whose face is marred by dust and sweat and blood..." -Theodore Roosevelt

This poem is very simple. The thing is i feel like you could have gone so much more in depth with it. It feels as though your only skimmig the surface. Try going back and digging into the emotion. But it works!

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:13 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

Well done on capturing the true essence of freindship.  At the end of the day, all we have are our true freinds.

on Feb. 25 2013 at 3:19 pm
redhairCat PLATINUM, Pebble Beach, California
47 articles 20 photos 411 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I can do anything!"

I feel the same way! You captured it so well!


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