A Lovelier Sunrise

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When the first ray of the waking sun
Penetrates the tranquil dew drop,
Dwelling on the jade leaf of a beautiful red rose,
Your cherubic face will hover,
Blushing baby pink over the flower...
A lovelier sunrise in Kashmir;
And in those exotic eyes of yours,
I behold the very sun;
Glowing gloriously as ever.





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necci said...
Mar. 28, 2013 at 9:54 am
beautiful, that is a very skillfully written poem
 
AnonymousLoveLetter said...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 8:06 am
That is beautiful. I like the words you used for the detail of the poem. Its like I can see it as an oil painting with the perfect colors. Well done.
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 8:10 am
Thank you anonymous. :) looking forward to reading your poetry ;)
 
anJoOM said...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 8:05 am
Great Work!! Keep Going!!
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Mar. 5, 2013 at 8:07 am
Thank you :)
 
compassion said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 6:52 am
Its really beautiful!! I could feel every word in the poem. nice flow! 
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 6:56 am
thank you :)  
 
Sabeen_Yameen said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 6:42 am
awww...beautiful.. (take this 'awww' as when you see a cute baby) kepp on writing.. :)
 
augustsummerfling This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 6:44 am
thank you, Sabeen :)
 
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