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First Kiss

I'm waiting for you
To make a move
You don't lean in
So I do.
You look away
My head sways
My hair drops in my face
You smooth it away with fingers soft as lace
Your lips meet mine
It makes me lose my mind
It only lasted a second.



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CTS207This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18 at 2:05 pm:
Very nice, normally I like my poems to flow towards the end. But in this I can make an exception for the twist at the end. Keep writing
 
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TheSkyOwesMeRainThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 18 at 1:54 am:
Wonderful! I like the twist at the end, that the kiss only lasted for a second! 
 
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