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Staring out across the water.
Her eyes cold with hate.
A smile filled with passion.
Knowing that it might be to late.

A dream amongst dreams
The distance between me & you.
I think of a distant time when.
We did what lovers do.

So save me this pain.
And lend me your heart.
Lost in these emotions.
That we have felt from the start.

I remember a time.
In which you laughed sweetly.
Or how your eyes gleamed.
When you smiled discreetly.

So take me away.
To the times we were happy.
The consistent feeling.
Before we felt crappy.

Lock me away.
In your minds attic.
Only a memory forever.
Lost in the black static.



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Sunny225This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 26, 2013 at 5:50 pm
oooooooohhhhhh my goodness shivers down my back
 
HannahBanana99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 6:01 pm
OMG u rele hav a gift for writing :) loved this poem
 
Whitehouse503 said...
Mar. 8, 2013 at 1:09 pm
oh my gosh! I absolutely love it! It almost makes me want to cry, but it's fantastic! great job :)
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 3:16 pm
This is soooo good! You have a talent!
 
Armyj13 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 5:00 pm
Thank you!!! :)
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 21, 2013 at 3:24 pm
I must say you are a very talented writer and that almost made me cry. Its amazing. You ever started writing a book? :)
 
Armyj13 replied...
Feb. 21, 2013 at 6:03 pm
Honestly yes, I might write a short story. Why?  
 
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