With Every | Teen Ink

With Every

February 10, 2013
By InkSpilledHeart BRONZE, Silver Creek, New York
InkSpilledHeart BRONZE, Silver Creek, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."


With every breath I take you're coursing through my veins
With every move I make you're dancing on my skin
With every beat my heart makes you're slithering in my blood
With every step I take you're following right behind
With every word that escapes my lips you're attached to my vocal cords
With every picture my eyes take you're hidden somewhere unseen
With every laugh I make you're the sound that radiates the room
With every feeling of love that consumes me you're the reason why


The author's comments:
This poem is about my boyfriend. I usually don't write like that so I really liked how it turned out.

Similar Articles

JOIN THE DISCUSSION

This article has 8 comments.


on Feb. 14 2013 at 7:44 pm
GreekGoddess BRONZE, Andover, Connecticut
3 articles 0 photos 182 comments

Favorite Quote:
"The unprepared rebel dies in the fire."
~unknown

What to say to love and brilance...?

on Feb. 14 2013 at 4:15 pm
SapphireLamour DIAMOND, Omaha, Nebraska
60 articles 0 photos 22 comments
I like the visuals you give in this poem.

on Feb. 14 2013 at 12:14 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
90 articles 0 photos 213 comments
This poem has amazing word choice and every word I see is love

on Feb. 14 2013 at 9:35 am
ShannonLaDieu SILVER, Waycross, Georgia
7 articles 4 photos 42 comments

Favorite Quote:
The best part of beauty is that no picture can express- Loren blake Chosen House of Night serise
mee-uf-ow!- Nala(Zoey's Cat) House of night Books
since when has public making-out become a turn-on for you?- Zoey Redbird

This is an really amazing poem. I can honestly tell how much time you put into it.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 11:15 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
214 articles 14 photos 1159 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

This is amazing and very well written:)

on Feb. 13 2013 at 10:16 pm
Positivity_At_Its_Finest DIAMOND, Morrow, Georgia
56 articles 2 photos 148 comments

Favorite Quote:
Life is a stage, get on it and perform your best act.

this makes me think of someone who is deeply in love. i love the detail you included in this, very good.

on Feb. 13 2013 at 1:50 pm
InkSpilledHeart BRONZE, Silver Creek, New York
1 article 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
"Be who you are and say what you feel, because those who mind don't matter and those who matter don't mind."

Thanks so much. :D

on Feb. 13 2013 at 12:20 am
mattisonteeter GOLD, Los Angeles, California
15 articles 0 photos 54 comments
There's something so striking about "slithering in my blood" it's such brilliant imagery. Wonderful, I felt the passion.