Magazine, website & books written by teens since 1989

Forever

Nothing will separate you, not now...

not ever

Their spirits will never leave us

Love is larger than any force...

or distance

Because of that...

you will always be together

Never stop loving them...

and they will be your’s forever.


They wait for us in Heaven above...

meeting new friends everyday

Loved ones greet one another...

and tell stories of their lives on Earth

We sit down here mourning...

missing them as days pass by

Foolish are we for thinking they are gone...

while they stay right by our sides

They never will leave us...

they will be our’s forever.




Join the Discussion


This article has 4 comments. Post your own!

LegendInTheMakingThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Apr. 18 at 1:49 pm:
It's a pretty good poem... Maybe for your next ones, add a little bit of figurative language. It always adds a little more dimension to the piece. If you dont mind, check out my work and let me know what you think. Thanks :)
 
CowboysAndAngelsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Apr. 19 at 8:19 am :
thanks for the tip and i'll be sure to check out ur work
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
CowboysAndAngelsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 13 at 5:13 pm:
Tell me what you think!!!!
 
gothicneko321 replied...
today at 3:27 pm :
I like it. :) the message is clear as well
 
Reply to this comment Post a new comment
 
Site Feedback