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As you walk by
And smile at me
I can see us together
Holding hands forever
Growning old and gray
As time passes us by
The world changes around us
But we only notice our love
Grow deeper each day
Holding hands forever
I can see us together
As you walk by
And smile at me



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FallenoutofgraceThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 3:14 pm:
This is amazing and i have to agree daydreaming is like life and 10 years of therapy all rolled up in a super day. keep it up i really like the imagry and the flow of your words. 5/5 stars way to go!
 
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MckayThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
May 15 at 7:14 pm:
So know what you're talking about here. I love to day dream. It's what keep me going. i love the imagery in this poem. Really good, Valery.
 
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