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My heart aches to hear your voice,
it aches to see you again.
My heart wants nothing but you,
it doesn't want to believe that your gone.
My mind has no way out of this darkness,
No way of knowing if its true,
it keeps listening to the Devils voice,
my body wants to listen too.
But I wont let it,
It's getting harder and harder to deny the urge,
I keep thinking that if I torture myself enough that it will bring him back,
I keeping wanting it to be me instead,
I loved him with all my heart and soul,
He killed himself because of me,
I keep getting told its not true,
but it was after he spoke with me.
It's my fault and only one person can tell me otherwise,
That one person is God.



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Kylie15 said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 8:53 pm:
THIS POEM IS GREAT....WONDERFULLY WROTE!! ;)
 
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Maggie99 said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 6:18 pm:
This was quite well written and easy to follow. Faith in God will mend even the worst broken hearts. Keep up the great work!
 
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Giggles15 This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 12:08 pm:
This was really good!
 
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RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 10, 2013 at 11:08 pm:
This was really cool. It had a few mistakes, but I could connect with it:) ... Sometimes I feel like you do, but if you are active with your faith and use god-given gifts to help others, God seems closer. Keep holding onto your faith! If you want, will you read my poem "Daniel"?
 
RedneckWomen replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 9:56 am :
You should also cheak out my other poem. Its different from this one.
 
RarelyJadedThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. replied...
Feb. 12, 2013 at 8:26 pm :
Okay. I will! :)
 
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