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Some day I'll be.
Right next to you walking closely.
Along the Ocean blue.
Where our first memories grew.
Back in a time.
Where true love did shine.
An experience meant to last.
But our love died fast.
To break through the barriers of society.
And see how we must be!
Oh love of mine.
Sweet and devine.
Stay strong.
Last life long.
Forever & ever.
Together.



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Sunny225This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 26, 2013 at 5:48 pm
nice work ......... keep at it
 
HannahBanana99This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 19, 2013 at 6:04 pm
Aww it was so cute and uplifting :) great job
 
country-cutey said...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 5:49 pm
awww i loved it nice job!  
 
Armyj13 replied...
Mar. 7, 2013 at 5:53 pm
Thank you!  
 
redhairCat This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 25, 2013 at 3:05 pm
This is a great poem. You really catured the feelings very well. I hope you find that special someone!
 
Armyj13 replied...
Mar. 1, 2013 at 5:02 pm
Thank you I hope to find her to!
 
SuNshiNe007 said...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 3:21 pm
I really like this and know how you feel. I felt this way before I got engaged. But you will find that one person one day, I promise.
 
Armyj13 replied...
Feb. 11, 2013 at 3:30 pm
I know I will. But that one day is very far away.  
 
SuNshiNe007 replied...
Feb. 21, 2013 at 3:19 pm
And how do you know ? :)
 
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