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Make me
I want to be pushed, and shoved, and destroyed
By you, and only by you
Yes it sounds twisted.
It is twisted.
But only you can make me
Only you can make me make something
Only you can make me blush
Make me smile
Make me cry
Only you can make me scream
Make me moan
Make me wonder
Don't just stand there,
Make me.
Make me into ME
The “me” that I need to be.
You are the only one who can make me
Make me try
Make me fail
Take control. Control me.
You can make me safe
Make me whisper
Make me sob
Make me shudder-
Shudders of pain
And shudders of ecstasy
Please, please make me.
You are the only one-
Who can make me numb
Who can make me feel
You are the only one
Who can make me run-
Make me want
Make me hope
Make me love
So what are you waiting for?
Make me.




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Fallenoutofgrace said...
today at 12:04 am:
It was amazing it made you think more on the essence of lvoe and the magic behind what young couples like others said feel it wys just amazing
 
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Mr.PoetmanThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 28 at 4:47 pm:
wow that was completely amazing. you captured the essense of love. you perfectly decribed what millions of young couples feel. I can relate to this story because that is how my girlfriend makes me feel :) so thanks for writing such a beautiful piece of poetry
 
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little-bird-girlThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Feb. 5 at 11:41 pm:
This is beautiful. The use of those two words is so powerful..you are a fantastic writer!!
 
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