Promise

January 28, 2013
By Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu


My hero
My star
My promise to you is that
You'll stay in my heart
No matter what
I'll never forget
watch over me from afar
Guide me to the good
and always love me
no matter how long it's been


The author's comments:
Promises from heaven

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Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:36 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you! 

Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Mar. 17 2013 at 11:35 am
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you! and no no one has told me that 

Mckay ELITE said...
on Mar. 16 2013 at 1:17 pm
Mckay ELITE, Somewhere, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"The people who are crazy enough to think they can change the world are the ones who do."
—Apple’s “Think Different” commercial, 1997
“Crazy people are considered mad by the rest of the society only because their intelligence isn't understood.”
― Weihui Zhou

I love it. Your style is very Emily Dickson. Has anyone ever told you that. Love it.

on Feb. 18 2013 at 12:10 pm
thatunknownthing DIAMOND, Dubai, Other
67 articles 0 photos 211 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Yesterday is history, tomorrow is a mystery, but today is a gift; that's why they call it the present"

short and pretty. good work.

Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:04 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you :)

Soccer23 GOLD said...
on Feb. 15 2013 at 10:03 pm
Soccer23 GOLD, Rockton, Illinois
11 articles 11 photos 23 comments

Favorite Quote:
Being deeply loved by someone gives you strength, while loving someone deeply gives you courage.
Lao Tzu

Thank you :)

on Feb. 13 2013 at 8:12 pm
TheCapturedBat GOLD, Belen, New Mexico
12 articles 0 photos 88 comments

Favorite Quote:
If all else perished and he remained, I should still continue to be; and if all else remained, and he were annihilated, the universe would turn to a mighty stranger.
-- Emily Bronte, Wuthering Heights

The devotion expressed in this poem is deep and beautiful.

on Feb. 12 2013 at 2:17 pm
EPluribusUnum DIAMOND, Woodbine, Maryland
59 articles 24 photos 280 comments

Favorite Quote:
"I shut my eyes and all the world drops dead;
I lift my lids and all is born again.
(I think I made you up inside my head)."
-Sylvia Plath

This is lonely and beautiful at the same time. :3 Lovely


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