January 27, 2013
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After my heart has broken
Beat me up and send me to hell
I've never asked for much
Just for someone to hug me
For someone to understand
Why can't you see me disappear
In the grains of sand
That are being refined
By the stare
Of your closed eyes
You can work for me
But you cannot love me
You don't know what it's like
Being lonely
Look out
There is a monster inside of me
How can I explain
What you never let me show
I don't know about love
But I don't want to feel afraid

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Deej6595 said...
Nov. 16, 2013 at 6:48 pm
This is a great poem. And I love what you are trying to say about the struggles with others and yourself. I can relate to this and it was nice to read something that addresses this.
Csenge replied...
Nov. 24, 2013 at 5:05 pm
Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.
A_Journey said...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 9:12 pm
Wow! This is amazing! :) I can feel the passion and sadness/anger in every line. I would maybe add punctuation to make the flow more noticable, if that makes sense. But its a wonderful poem...I don't think I know anyone who wouldn't relate to this. :)
Csenge replied...
Feb. 5, 2013 at 9:53 pm
Thank you. :)
colorguardgrl This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 11:12 am
amazing really hits home
Csenge replied...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 4:23 pm
Thank you. ^_^
MissRedPoet said...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 12:43 pm
I really liked your poem. what inspired you?
Csenge replied...
Feb. 1, 2013 at 12:36 am
I was having some trouble with the family. My mom doesn't always understand when it comes to my school work, that I can't do it all day. And I don't have a lot of friends to support me either. And there you have a poem.
2sing said...
Jan. 31, 2013 at 12:22 pm
omg this is a master piece i love this i felt evey word that u spoke and  it was well written great job it was like a song to my HEART
Csenge replied...
Aug. 30, 2013 at 4:22 pm
Thank you. ^_^
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