Understand

January 27, 2013
By Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.


After my heart has broken
Beat me up and send me to hell
I've never asked for much
Just for someone to hug me
For someone to understand
Why can't you see me disappear
In the grains of sand
That are being refined
By the stare
Of your closed eyes
You can work for me
But you cannot love me
You don't know what it's like
Being lonely
Look out
There is a monster inside of me
How can I explain
What you never let me show
I don't know about love
But I don't want to feel afraid
Anymore



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on Nov. 24 2013 at 5:05 pm
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.

Thank you very much, I'm glad you liked it.

on Nov. 16 2013 at 6:48 pm
Deej6595 BRONZE, Billerica, Massachusetts
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Favorite Quote:
Two roads diverged in a wood, and I--I took the one less traveled by, And that has made all the difference.

This is a great poem. And I love what you are trying to say about the struggles with others and yourself. I can relate to this and it was nice to read something that addresses this.

on Aug. 30 2013 at 4:23 pm
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.

Thank you. ^_^

on Aug. 30 2013 at 4:22 pm
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.

Thank you. ^_^

on Feb. 5 2013 at 9:53 pm
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.

Thank you. :)

A_Journey GOLD said...
on Feb. 5 2013 at 9:12 pm
A_Journey GOLD, Tampa, Florida
16 articles 2 photos 62 comments

Favorite Quote:
The Muse of Poetry should not know that roses in manure grow. ~The Formula, Langston Hughes
You may write me down in history with your bitter, twisted ties. You may trod me in the very dirt, but still, like dirt, I rise. ~Still I Rise, Maya Angelou

Wow! This is amazing! :) I can feel the passion and sadness/anger in every line. I would maybe add punctuation to make the flow more noticable, if that makes sense. But its a wonderful poem...I don't think I know anyone who wouldn't relate to this. :)

on Feb. 1 2013 at 11:12 am
colorguardgrl ELITE, Derry, New Hampshire
111 articles 10 photos 20 comments

Favorite Quote:
“If I had a world of my own, everything would be nonsense. Nothing would be what it is, because everything would be what it isn't. And contrary wise, what is, it wouldn't be. And what it wouldn't be, it would. You see?” - Mad Hatter

amazing really hits home

on Feb. 1 2013 at 12:36 am
Csenge PLATINUM, Glendale, Arizona
48 articles 0 photos 5 comments

Favorite Quote:
Carpe Diem.

I was having some trouble with the family. My mom doesn't always understand when it comes to my school work, that I can't do it all day. And I don't have a lot of friends to support me either. And there you have a poem.

on Jan. 31 2013 at 12:43 pm
DarkAngel101 GOLD, Birmingham, Alabama
13 articles 2 photos 32 comments

Favorite Quote:
"Don't count your tears, they mean only sorrow. But count the ones you hold back, which are your strength that makes you stronger."

I really liked your poem. what inspired you?

2sing said...
on Jan. 31 2013 at 12:22 pm
2sing, Wilmington, North Carolina
0 articles 0 photos 2 comments

Favorite Quote:
Keep love in your heart. A life without it is like a sunless garden when the flowers are dead.
Oscar Wilde

omg this is a master piece i love this i felt evey word that u spoke and  it was well written great job it was like a song to my HEART




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