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Whoosh
Goes the wind and all
My memories of
You

Chirp
Go the birds
Along with the
Beat of my broken
Heart

Whenever I choose
To think about
You, my darling
It’s dandelion
Picking

Because for some
Reason, once I start to
Reminisce
About all the bright and
Sunny memories
We’ve had, I can’t
Stop

You’re a bright
Flower,
My dear
One that started
To die as soon
As I picked you
Up out of the
Ground, where you
Belong




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SakuyaThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 31 at 9:45 am:
Whoa this has a lot of emotion in it and I love pieces that are centered around something that people wouldn't think to write about! This structure is cool too because it is like the fluttering and will-o-whisp like feeling of the flower(well I guess I should say weed).
 
BrokenBrookeThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 31 at 6:06 pm :
Thank you so much!!!!
 
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