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When was the last time you fell back and laid in the soft green grass?
When was the last time you just watched the clouds?
When was the last time you slept under a starry night sky?
When was the last time you took some time for yourself? Life is too short to live working. You are never to busy to take time for the little things, to take time for you. Life is short.




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Sparkle1popsThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 28 at 12:14 pm:
I really like that, it sparks lots of ideas
 
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Royally_Screwed_PrincessThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24 at 4:15 pm:
Whilst it has a certain level of emotion in it, and describes just how short life can be it lacks poetic essence which of course is compulsory in a poem. Also I think the flow ans rhythm need improving, it has no beat and is basically a list of questions. To improve I really would revise it and try include some metaphors or dollars, imagery, pace and meter, and possibly a little rhyme of you can do it well enough. Good try. 
 
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Hipster_Lovelock_Princess said...
Jan. 24 at 4:13 pm:
not something i'm used to but.... i love it.
 
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PandaBearLouise15This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 24 at 4:10 pm:
SHORT AND DESCRIBES IT ALL! PERFECT I LOVE IT!
 
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