January 18, 2013
By praise_pray_write BRONZE, Wexford, Pennsylvania
praise_pray_write BRONZE, Wexford, Pennsylvania
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Favorite Quote:
...just breathe...

Frustratingly angering
It is abusive to the mind
Into some deceivingly shallow crevice
All important tasks slide
Little bells hinting to the brain
Something has been neglected

Rummage around
It must be here somewhere
Come on now,
Then up they rise as if they never fell
But time has passed
Oh no
Oh well
Late is not perfect
Forgetting is not ideal
But as a fallible creation
Forgiveness is necessary

The author's comments:
My week was filled to the brim with forgetful situations. Perhaps I am not alone.

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on Feb. 5 2013 at 9:28 pm
Jade.I.Am ELITE, Fishers, Indiana
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Favorite Quote:
“If you're losing your soul and you know it, then you've still got a soul left to lose”
― Charles Bukowski

I am blown away by this poem! The sudden rhyme in the middle of the second stanza made the whole thing come together and your word choice was beautiful!

on Jan. 22 2013 at 6:14 pm
HPRGSuperFan GOLD, Indian Creek, Illinois
12 articles 6 photos 31 comments

Favorite Quote:
If people never did silly things nothing intelligent would ever get done.
--Ludwig Wittgenstein

This is a lovely poem! Incredibly ingenius with an intriguing style, I can really connect to your poem. Beautiful; keep up the good work!:)


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