Golden Sweat

January 13, 2013
By ZhaNae BRONZE, Duncanville, Texas
ZhaNae BRONZE, Duncanville, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
Hurt people, hurt people.

Dull eyes: golden sweat.
I have tried, and I've found my threat
Blue veins because my loss of breath
Starving: from Striving for success.
I have spotted a sight of black and gray
Known to men? I cannot say
I have found out which is true
Trying to hard can lead us bruised.

The author's comments:
Trying to hard to succeed is worthless when it's selfish.

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