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December 20, 2012
By YoungSupremeWriter GOLD, Goose Creek, South Carolina
YoungSupremeWriter GOLD, Goose Creek, South Carolina
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Favorite Quote:
I broke up with my DOUBTS , got engaged to my FAITH & now im marrying my DREAMS , living my life to the fullest


i gave myself away
like so many forced apologies.
my body was never anything more
than a sorry to you:
something that hurt when it wanted to
and gave you hickeys when i meant it.
i filled your mouth up with antonyms
for blame, kissed them into you,
stacked vocabulary up high where your
wisdom teeth should have been.
your tongue would mull me over
thoughtfully, as if your taste buds
were critics of my morality.
then there would always be
one deep hard swallow when my
sorry got putrid in your mouth
and you couldn't spit it out
the way you had made me.


The author's comments:
Writing at night is when emotions are on the rise.

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on Aug. 3 2016 at 4:52 pm
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
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" Beauty isn't about having pretty face. It's about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul"

@YoungSupremeWriter Your very welcome! you are a very good writer!

on Jul. 31 2016 at 11:29 pm
YoungSupremeWriter GOLD, Goose Creek, South Carolina
19 articles 0 photos 1 comment

Favorite Quote:
I broke up with my DOUBTS , got engaged to my FAITH & now im marrying my DREAMS , living my life to the fullest

@YoungBeauty thank you so much!

on Jul. 31 2016 at 11:52 am
YoungBeauty GOLD, Claremont, New Hampshire
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Favorite Quote:
" Beauty isn't about having pretty face. It's about having a pretty mind, a pretty heart, and a pretty soul"

Wow, this piece is amazing! Please keep writing!


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