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I became a butterfly
When I was two,
and my wimpy young feet,
recognized the feel of the sand,
they said that I was old enough to learn,
and I did.

I'd be a hero one day,
I had to be one,
to be precise.

When I said I wanted to go out,
they said that outside was evil,
so stay inside,
you're safe and warm.
"safe and warm"

And when I said I wanted to ---
almost anything, I wanted to,
they'd say heroes don't want,
they do,
and I wanted to do.
When I opened my mouth,
they told me to close it,
for heroes breathe hero.
Don't let the non-heroes enter.

They also closed my windows and door,
and wrapped me around.
It was safe and warm,
soft white,
but tight.

And so I broke the walls,
and I wished,
and I became a butterfly,
and flew to you.




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HamzawaseemThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
today at 7:42 am:
Amazing work you just let me read! Thanks
 
royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
today at 8:06 am :
means a lot, thanks!
 
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LexusMarieThis teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Mar. 30 at 10:32 pm:
I just wanted to tell you how great this was! I love this and I completely undertsand it. It's really easy to read and it flows pretty nice. I like the way it's written. And I like the photo you chose. You're a great writer. Thank you so much for sharing such a piece of work. c:
 
royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
May 17 at 10:37 pm :
Thanks a LOT Lexus, you just made my day!
 
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shaprisha said...
Jan. 14 at 9:19 pm:
wonderful and realy great to read  
 
royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 15 at 3:19 am :
  thanks!
 
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Writergurl101This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. said...
Jan. 14 at 8:04 pm:
This was beautiful!
 
royalujjwa4This teenager is a 'regular' and has contributed a lot of work, comments and/or forum posts, and has received many votes and high ratings over a long period of time. replied...
Jan. 14 at 8:52 pm :
   thanks!
 
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