Save me

January 6, 2013
By Tammy Eastridge BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
Tammy Eastridge BRONZE, Orlando, Florida
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And this girl,With so much potential,so much to give,cracked.
"Why live?Why fight?Why give it your all just to break again?"
She sits in the dark by herself and is consumed by her fears,
her scars,the demons she hides within.
"Save me.."

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on Jan. 12 2013 at 12:10 am
justkeepwriting GOLD, Los Angeles, California
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Favorite Quote:
Let me live, love, and say it well in good sentences - Sylvia Plath

Definitely relate. 

on Jan. 10 2013 at 6:26 pm
Theviolinthepoet BRONZE, Fairfield, Connecticut
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I loved this poem. I feel like its something we can all relate to at one point or another just asking why. Maybe not to suck an extremity as you described but in different ways. Nicejob!

Paigers97 GOLD said...
on Jan. 10 2013 at 1:14 pm
Paigers97 GOLD, Stanardsville, Virginia
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Favorite Quote:
"Imagination is more important than knowledge." --Albert Einstein

I think that u capture this feeling very well

on Jan. 9 2013 at 9:07 pm
sadesdd DIAMOND, Elma, Iowa
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Wow. This poem has a lot of darkness in it, which I do like. But it is sad there has to be feelings like this. This is a great poem.

on Jan. 9 2013 at 7:35 pm
Whilloh PLATINUM, Austin, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Would you like a jelly baby?" - The Doctor

great poem! i know how you feel


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