Save me

January 6, 2013
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And this girl,With so much potential,so much to give,cracked.
"Why live?Why fight?Why give it your all just to break again?"
She sits in the dark by herself and is consumed by her fears,
her scars,the demons she hides within.
"Save me.."

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justkeepwriting This work has been published in the Teen Ink monthly print magazine. said...
Jan. 12, 2013 at 12:10 am
Definitely relate. 
Theviolinthepoet said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 6:26 pm
I loved this poem. I feel like its something we can all relate to at one point or another just asking why. Maybe not to suck an extremity as you described but in different ways. Nicejob!
IsabelJames said...
Jan. 10, 2013 at 1:14 pm
I think that u capture this feeling very well
sadesdd said...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 9:07 pm
Wow. This poem has a lot of darkness in it, which I do like. But it is sad there has to be feelings like this. This is a great poem.
Solaya said...
Jan. 9, 2013 at 7:35 pm
great poem! i know how you feel
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