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Incandescence

January 3, 2013
By bright_eyes BRONZE, Ojai, California
bright_eyes BRONZE, Ojai, California
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Shimmering sprites
Darting faeries
Eyes, open wide
The world is color, is sound, is light
Safe inside my head
I dream a world you wouldn't
comprehend.



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on Jan. 5 2013 at 4:02 pm
bright_eyes BRONZE, Ojai, California
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Thank you! And yeah, this poem in the middle of a very mediocre one I wrote a few months ago, cut down and tweaked, of course. Thanks for taking the time to read ^.^

the.odd.life said...
on Jan. 5 2013 at 4:01 pm
she such an amazing writer!

on Jan. 5 2013 at 11:51 am
TaylorWintry DIAMOND, Carrollton, Texas
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Favorite Quote:
"Never fear shadows. They simply mean there's a light shining somewhere nearby." - Unknown

This is beautiful! My favorite line is "the world is color, is sound, is light". That couldn't be truer. I don't know if it was on purpose, but  your poem changes. THe beginning is very fantastic (meaning fantasy) and almost fairy-taleish. THe third and fourth lines change that and transform it into a realistic world. The sixth and seventh lines make it as real and it can get: pure imagination ruling over all. This is SO clever to think of. Great job!!